This is a very nice video. I love the editing and its clear you put effort into it. The only thing id change is the intros at the start as they didn't fit the rest of the video.
I like it. Though I gotta say for a 1:30 video a 16 second intro is over kill. Perhaps making a longer video would help especially given your creation abilities. Propably gonna take longer to make but it would be worth it.