Request Advice for this Slap to the Face/July 4th video?

[Mark Aquiapao]

What do you guys think of this video? Any advice on what I could do better? Thanks!

 

[derwinvlog]

love the video mark . i could use some pointers myself to bring more subs and views. you should do funny skits time to time..

 

[Mardy Rooster]

Seemed like a good video, The title does not really do it justice though

 

[Mark Aquiapao]

Seemed like a good video, The title does not really do it justice though

Thanks dude! What do you think would've been a good title then?

 

[BlueBard]

This was a great video! I don't live in America myself, so it was real fun to see it from your perspective! greta vid, loved it ^_^